CJ FINAL PROJECT: OVERCROWDING BUSES

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  1. The idea for this project is relatable, I like your examples and your style of interviewing. A few things I’d like to suggest is the title could be more specific of the location or city you are working on, another suggestion I’d like to add is if you could speak up a little louder would be nice. Great video though!

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  2. I loved how you showed the problem first and the first person you interviewed

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  3. Hey Leslie, you've created a video about the overcrowded buses in Surrey, providing the community with insight into the public transportation situation. I appreciate that you interviewed bus drivers and passengers, enabling a deeper understanding of the problem. Moreover, the quality of your video remains very stable; even on an overly crowded bus, there is no shaking. My advice is to increase the volume of your personal introduction to the theme and conclusion, as they currently sound a bit unclear. Also, though it might seem nitpicky, I think you could film the ending in a different location for a more complete video experience.

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  4. Hey, I loved your video, it is the one of the biggest problem.

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